View Full Version : Sorta finished work Dump!
Daray
January 8th, 2007, 07:03 AM
Ok, incredibly shy about showing these, they are not as great as all the other ones out there. But heres some already finished work I have! :bashful: The priestess one was acutally entered into the 'Aphrodisa- Art of the Female Form' (i think it was) competition and I got a little corner in the book! Was the best thing to happen so far with my art! :confident:
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These Last two may appear really dark. I work with a blackscreen, and once its saved, its really dark on my monitor. So apologies if they are, please let me know! :[
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^ Was my entry for the World of Warcraft art competition. I had never done an enviroment before. I wish I hadnt either now! :}
Molly
January 8th, 2007, 07:12 AM
I know showing your work can be very daunting, but you've done it now so again - well done!
I see alotta potential - you keep at it sweetheart!
Mollyx
Newbie Artist
January 8th, 2007, 07:25 AM
I think it is really good. Your use of colour is spot on, it works well. The only thing i would say, is that on the second piece the top half of the weapon is unsymetrical, the left side should be slightly higher(unless it is supposed to be) and she looks slightly overwhelmed with it resting on the floor, maybe hold it just above ground level to show she is in control. But excellent detail!! Keep posting, its great:)
Lotet
January 8th, 2007, 04:14 PM
*WoW fan art is falling over you, you die* '
The first one is awesome, the rest seems kind of sloppy but I love the UD priest , there’s something about his face ( which he don’t really have) that I like. And the dude in the tree is kinda cool to
just give your work more love and u will be fine =P
Jason Rainville
January 8th, 2007, 07:02 PM
Overall: A lot of anatomy and pose akwardness/stiffness. Plenty of overy saturated colours and confused/unapparent lightsources. A lot of them look like you didn't take too much time with them.
My advice: Keep drawing people from life and if you want to work in colour, also paint things from life as well to know how lihgt/shadow/colours work. Take your time on your work, don't be afraid to 'ruin' your original lines or remove your lines altogether. Good luck.
GentleFood3
January 8th, 2007, 07:16 PM
rapid fire:
The hair of the girl with the blonde bangs is bugging me. Hair isn't transparent.
Drawing your characters in profile like that tends to make the picture feel extremely stiff.
I just noticed the photos of pumpkins. Nothing inherently wrong with photo manips, but it just clashes with the flatness of your painting.
The first pic is definitely cool, but keep developing the fundamentals (anatomy, brush control, etc) so the other pics are of similar quality
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