COCA COLA soda POP

[Sirkenneth]

Still life in guoche of an old coke bottle I found while scuba diving. Ah-yeah. crits pleeease--if you can crit a still life

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs13/300W/i/2007/003/2/0/POP_by_SirKenneth.jpg

[Sierra T. Rush]

Looks good, makes me thirsty..hehe.

Um, the one thing that immediately bugged me was there is very little actual shadow, the shadow behind it is peach colored, and well...the neck is warbled.

Also the word Cola, is very dark, not very bubbly looking. Looks like someone drew it on the bottle, instead of it being part of the bottle.

[Sirkenneth]

Thanks-i defnilty agree
-the shadow is defnitly a problem-and a result of my lack of control over watercolors. I actauly cropped alot of it out. - and it was on can old shirt-there was a fold there and the shadow waved.
I had problems with the cola part--i diddnt know wether to make the whole side dark-or brighten the letters. Ill have to go play with it~!
Thanks for the comment