Through the mountains wip

[mikeb87]

Coming back from the mountains i made this sketch that i started to color.
I'm waiting for any your suggestion

[elpez]

I would get the horizon line horizontal and try to get the dinamic composition you´re looking for using another type of persepctive, not one with a central focal point. I made a quck paint over. hope it helps.

cheers

[Dose206]

i agree with elpez. change the horizon line and widen it a bit and it will be wonderful. this is a very promising piece.