need help with anotomy

[gamefan84]

i uploaded the first one a few weeks ago. i obviously needed to work on the anatomy particularly the stomach. i continued working on it a bit but cant find the reference i need. anyone have any suggestions in terms of anatomy or overall colors? does the blue sabers stick out to the point where they hurt it? oh i know i still need to add major highlights

[fantasyartist]

I like your drawing. The anatomy looks pretty decent. Her shoulders could use some volume specially her right shoulder, try making them pop out a little from the arm.The abs are going in the right direction but I think they still need more twisting. Try to get their center line right and built the rest around it. As for reference just take a chair and sit in that pose in front of the mirror (if your a guy just make sure no one catch you) and observe how your waist twists.

[evildragonfire]

I agree with fantasyartist, her center line needs to twist more to show the movement of her body. Also since the light sabers are blue, there would be alot more blue light reflected on her, even to the point of underlighting her face as well. Keep going on it, and good luck! :)

[gamefan84]

thanks ill work some more today and upload. oh how do i repost a new image if i click on one of the buttons it wants a url.

[look]

The stomach on the left one looks better. The other things that pop right at me are: her left (our right) arm being too short, her right knee and shin is too thin compare to the other one. Her jawline is too squarish, hands and feet are too small at the moment. And if she's flying at high speed, it'd be more convincible if the wings are being pushed backward closer to her body.

[affluxing heart]

looks to me like the right arm is too long but i'm not a 100%