new nude

[KPacka]

my friend Nina.

thinking if i should do it in color or black and white charcoal ...

p.s. those who saw my previous nudes, please critique this one

[silvestri99]

It seems as though you are spending a lot of time looking at the lines of the figure and not the form as a whole or how the different forms flow together. I would work on less detail and focus on the flow of the lines. Also take into consideration the negative space behind the figure and how it defines it.
Good job so far and keep it up!

[KPacka]

yes. thus I said still working on it:)
I was working on getting the proportions right, cause last time i got into troublefor that:)
So now im working on getting the whole thing together along with proportions:)
Thanks!

[sone_one]

this looks traced... sorry if it aint, but i cant help it.