Electric Ninja

[darkcult]

Spent the night with this one( 5-6 hrs). PS7 from the scratch…

http://www.portfolios.com/Pics/vatra/vatra_1_p.JPG


C&C welcome…

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[R_M]

Hi Darkcult,
good one, interesting concept with the energy/blood? lines flowing trough him. :D
overall the proportions are right but have a minor crit: watch your anatomy, the abs are wrong, and his knees are abit to low (but that could be the view).
I have been studiing the bridgmans book on anatomy and they are a great help to understand exactly how we are put toegheter. plus they are cheap!
the pants have a nice silky feel to them.

[gasmask]

Hey, im likin his pants alot, you did those well, the only thing that bugs me is those red wire things, they are really distracting since the rest of him is basically grey, they hog all the attention. Try changin them to a cool color like blue.

[J.Peckham]

yup you can change that to blue and please darken the background so we can see some contrast...kinda grey on grey right now. hey! this is the first thing i've seen of yours darkcult, sweet job:p

[Mr.Magnetichead]

I'm an electrix ninja but no one knowd it!

[darkcult]

Thanks-

R_M, gasmask, J.Peckham, Mr.Magnetichead !!

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[blackhand]

I think the concept overall could use a little more work--the costume in itself is very plain and doesn't say 'ninja' to me.

The rendering and cloth folds are nice, but I think you could work on the pose a little as well--the figures just seems to be standing there. Again, perhaps a more 'ninja' like pose or a more threatening and aggressive pose would help.

Keep working at it.

[darkcult]

there is no bullsh*ting you blackhand :D

Thanks ;)
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[krayz]

A ninja with doc martins. Interesting ;]

The lat area and the collarbone area look a little strange. Could be a little more dynamic and as blackhand said he doesn't really look like a ninja.

I think those red dotted lines on his body are a tad distracting.

Good work regardless.

Thought I might as well include the following link... http://www.completemartialarts.com/whoswho/pictures/bruceleepic1.htm

Few good pics there to reference for muscles and poses.

[darkcult]

krayz- Doc Martins are there for easy skull-crackin’ he he.

Thanks for the link ( and C&C)!

:)

[Loga4]

He,nindja ti je super:)
Cool drawing!

[J.Peckham]

i kinda like that he's not in a "ninja stance" it makes me wonder what the hell he's about to me...wait that didn't sound good--

[darkcult]

He’s about to fry some eggs and kick some asses :D



Loga4----- ;)