Light test

[Hyaloclastics]

Just practising on light and mood..
C&C are welcomed!

[Pascallo]

Mood is quite okay I would say, but there is not much tension in this one. it looks all the same, maybe you should try to get an focus into it. some building or maybe a person having a greater contrast or form or something.

[Arteshu]

I'm agry with pascallo, some part should be more clear, you have a cool light, but to much flow makes look your picture a bit too plane... It's just a question of little details...:^^:

[Raul Tabajara]

I realy liked!
I think that the house of the right is a litle off of the perspective... Is just a felling, if the house is ok, forget this comment! :)

[graywood]

I love it,

I don't care about form or perspective so much as I care about overall mood and feel.

This is a piece that I could stare into for hours, just relishing the ominous feel of it.

I like the all the blurring and deep shadows, particularly the one that slashes across the center building.

To me, this kind of work is what creates stories.

well done,

[Hyaloclastics]

Thanks for the c&c guys
Yes,the house in the right is off.That's what happens when i don't use any perspective lines.
Now that you mention it,i agree that the picture also looks kind of plane.I think it needs more subtle values.
Thanks again for the comments!:D

[mirzaercin]

Just practising on light and mood..
C&C are welcomed!


Just beautiful:)

[tensai]

dude - that house is fixable. just work it a bit more and do some more of these cause it looks sweet. i think its shows good atmophere and nice areas that pop forward or backward. great texture too.