Davey p's fresh stuff

[our]

yea im a lurker, or voyeur but here is some of my w.i.p,

[softocean]

Some fun concepts and mise en scene? here. I'll just comment on the first image though.

It looks like the girl isn't popping out into the fg much, and I'm losing the umbrulla in the bridge. I suggest playing with contrast, or saturation to try and seperate the girl and the umbrella from the bg more. It looks to me as if she is a large person sitting next to the bridge rather than hovering a distance away.

My sketchbook is here (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71080)