Newbie Alert! (Art inside)

[NoUseFrAName]

Hiyas, I'm new here.
I'm working on a game design with some friends here at school....it's an RPG...I'm the lead concept artist....

here's a quickie pen sketch of one of the characters(Mara) coloured in photoshop in 45 min to an hour.

http://www.cdis.org/~rslanina/MARAJPEG.jpg

-Rob(Edit: TasXsiT is a Numpty hee hee!)

[Halis_Aetrous]

Her left arm has an odd shape, like she has no tricep. Its my recommendation to check a muscle diagram of an arm if you have any trouble (sorry, I don't know where to find one). From my limited knowledge of proportions, it looks like you are doing fine there. I would say her right eye could be a bit lower.

A piece of advice one guy told me is to draw lines connecting both eyes, both cheekbones, and both nostrils. It is drawn correctly if they are all parallel. Also, as this same person has told me, the eyes should be one eye length apart. Your right eye could go a just a little farther in, too, but that is no biggie.

You really seem to have faces and proportions down, its just the little details that make the drawing a little bit less than it could have been. Your use of coloring and tatoo design, and jewelry design, by the way, are quite impressive.

Keep up the great work, and keep practicing.

[NoUseFrAName]

thank ya! good pointers & stuff....your comments are much appreciated!

...oh, and if you're looking for anatomy stuff, checkout www.fineart.sk (I hope that's the right link....) they have a great selectioon of reference stuff, including an entire Andrew Loomis Anatomy book.

-Rob

[michael see]

yup..it sure is the left arm problem.just a suggestion..when u wanna draw a figure of a person,sketch it out 1st before the detailing stuff..the bone structure of the body is essential.she looks like she gonna fall base on the way she stand..
keep it up buddy:)