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ArielFerreyra
December 11th, 2006, 12:23 PM
http://img348.imageshack.us/img348/620/untitled1bpb7.jpg
my first post in this community... hope you like it ;) Cannonball, a Marvel character... x-factor i think...

painter 9 and effects on photoshop...
MephistoLV
December 11th, 2006, 02:09 PM
The blur is hurting my eyes. Other than that, nice image.
Jushra
December 11th, 2006, 03:50 PM
good work on the motion, but the blur is a bit too strong, i'd say tone that down and sharpen up the character himself. also, the scale on that rear contrail seems to be a bit too big, and i'd arc it a bit more to make it more dynamic.
Seedling
December 12th, 2006, 08:21 AM
His torso doesn't look foreshortened, which leads me to the question: "what ate his legs?"
ArielFerreyra
December 12th, 2006, 08:58 AM
The blur is hurting my eyes. Other than that, nice image.

yeap... too blurred... i was just killing time at work and i draw this.. i didnt put too much atention to it :p...
Rabid
December 12th, 2006, 10:34 AM
I think the fact that the blur is going all the same direction when this guy is obviously turning towards us kind of bothers me the most....
FedericoCombi
December 14th, 2006, 06:41 AM
Hey! very nice work, Keep it going man!

-Combi:wink:
Shadowflux
December 14th, 2006, 09:36 AM
Welcome to CA!

I like it, the colors are nice and the composition is pretty good. Only thing I'd say is I feel the left side of the piece is a little boring, maybe try varying the color in the sky, or adding an airplane or somthing. Maybe an exploded fighter jet falling out of the sky?

Just my two cents.

Keep posting!
WanderingProphet
December 14th, 2006, 05:06 PM
Nice pic, Cannonball is one of my favorite supporting characters. THe only problem I see is the angle of the thrusting hand and the torso don't match. work on your line of motion