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Deevad
December 9th, 2006, 01:28 PM
Hi Conceptart artist and readers,

Here is my last picture, "Spider Harp" represent a fantasy musician able to play harp on a spider web. A lot of sens can be readed in it, between artist and internet, or about the 'trust' in general. I paint it as a personnal piece, and it was a really big and fragile work.
I thanks 3Dvf and Tdt3D users to help me in my WIP.

here are some close up ( I attach the picture ) :

http://david.revoy.free.fr/forums/3DVF/Spider-Harp/spider-harp-revoy-end-zoom1.jpg


http://david.revoy.free.fr/forums/3DVF/Spider-Harp/spider-harp-revoy-end-zoom2.jpg


http://david.revoy.free.fr/forums/3DVF/Spider-Harp/spider-harp-revoy-end-zoom3.jpg


Feel free to comment , I will feel happy to talk about it.

Ive
December 9th, 2006, 02:21 PM
Wow! A great idea, and you captured a very warm atmosphere, I like that!
I really don't have any critiques except for that tail of her cap. Looks like you've croped the image and the part of the tail. Also the rendering on the sickle reminds me more of ivory than metal but that's not important at all :)
great job.

Deevad
December 9th, 2006, 02:26 PM
Thanks Ive,
Your critiques are right. Thanks about it, I will work more my metals materials. ( it's true that it look as ivory , now you said it )

EricT
December 10th, 2006, 12:01 AM
This is one of the coolest images I've come accross in a while. The only critic I could find, and I really looked hard, was that maybe the hair on the side of her face was too "glued" together..perhaps a little bit of hair should be free from the ones that are attached together. That's still a minimal detail compared to the great concept combined with great execution

Hope to see more from you

anubis713
December 10th, 2006, 12:21 AM
Incredible! I agree with EricT. Little wisps of the hair or something.
Very incredible concept!

Hookswords
December 10th, 2006, 12:23 AM
Wow. That is one of the best depictions of a druid I've seen in awhile. It really captures the oneness with nature. My only crit is the sickle. The sharp edge makes a optical illusion. It looks like it is depth, not an edge. That is to say it looks like a really thick sickle. Great stuff

Deevad
December 10th, 2006, 07:43 AM
Thanks EricT, anubis713 and Hookswords.
Your critics are right, and I note them carefully, cause I want to continue with druidish concept. ;-)

Ramn
December 10th, 2006, 12:32 PM
Absolutely incredible. The tilted horizon is bothering me a bit though. Now it's just skewed. A straight or perhaps an uneven one would have worked better in my opinion.

Amazing work. It's people like you who give me a headache of anxiety for not practicing 24/7.

Pascallo
December 10th, 2006, 12:54 PM
Absolutely incredible. The tilted horizon is bothering me a bit though. Now it's just skewed. A straight or perhaps an uneven one would have worked better in my opinion.


Maybe its even because the wood in the back is going to the upper left and is leading the view out of the picture, when you "read" the image from left to right. Maybe straight or to the upper right direction.
But I think that is nearly not worth mentioning, cause it is an amazing peace! really nice done!

rockdraw
December 11th, 2006, 05:29 AM
yeah lets rock ;) nice peace of art!

stalsby
December 11th, 2006, 09:00 AM
nice painting!

Faradoon
December 11th, 2006, 12:43 PM
Wonderful picture. I love the concentration in her face, and the whole picture!

Beautyful and lovely work! <3

Mandryk
December 11th, 2006, 12:50 PM
Nice paint job. I can't help but feel like she just walked head-on into that tree and smacked her head. Ouch!

noiion
December 12th, 2006, 12:38 PM
I love those warm colors. Cheers!