Smokeys sketchbook

[Smoke]

Hello there ConceptArt.org

First real studies I have ever put myself to, wondering if some crits and/or helpful advice can be had. :) (sorry for the mangled image my scanner is a )

[CptScarlet]

Welcome to CA :)
Some nice studies their, may I ask what reference you were using for these?
One thing I would reccomend if your working on A4 is to try and work a bit larger and really take your time to get your studies as accurate as possible.

Also I dont know if its because your using a soft lead or what but your lines look quite soft and feathery if you get what I mean, but apart from that it looks good.

Really nice start!

Cpt.

[Smoke]

I was using a soft pencil yes, I shall have to change that. Reference was myself in a mirror. Although it gives the Idea that I look deformed, but I don`t :D