What do u think?

[timmytots2]

Just wondered what you think. It's probably different to your usual Art:

www.timothy-clark.com/mag/art/conceptual/filmevents/thedream

It still needs a bit of work on the text and music but ok.

[Seedling]

What do you want feedback on? The website?

I am immediately put off by the music. It is generally a bad idea to have automatic music or sounds of any sort on a website, because a portion of your audience will have to go clawing for the speaker to turn the bloody thing off before it wakes the kids or brings coworkers laughing. after that point, they cease to be a friendly audience.

My second quick impression is "OMG, this dude is into himself WAY too much. I am not going to waste my time reading what he has written about himself." While I suspect there is some good writing on the website, if your audience can't get past this impression, they'll never find that out.

Lastly, you claim to be an artist, correct? I can't find it at a glance and I am unwilling to flail around looking for it. All my flailings found were photographs. Are you a photographer? If so, say so, because otherwise those images will be mistaken for a snapshot gallery instead of something that you are serious about. If there is no obvious art, I am forced to conclude that you are just another blogger. Make your art front and center in the website if you want to portray yourself as an artist.