scene #14

[guerrierhardcore]

The guy is very tall and the chick is small. I did that on purpose

- What mistakes there is is the position/perspective of the characters.
- Tell me about about anatomy errors.
- I made the aircraft in 3D and I put it there as a part of the future background... there will be more added. Is The aircraft position and angle orientation is correct according to the characters?
- Anything else?

[Cookiedough]

Pssst. Where's the pic?

*edit: great, you found the picture. Might wanna put ALL your pictures in 1 thread though. Kinda rude to spam your pics all over like that.

Your chicks head is wayyyy too small for her height. Same goes for the guy. They both have really long legs. Their limbs seem kinda shapeless, even though the suits are skintight. Check up some anatomy books for the proper muscleshapes. Dude has small feet for his height.

I think they need something more to stand on to relate to the aircraft. I don't know if the angle is correct, what are you trying to do here? I find their outfits a bit boring, especially of the girl.

[guerrierhardcore]

* I did not know I could post many pictures For one thread. I'll do this the next time. Sorry

[guerrierhardcore]

okay
For now I forget about the background, the suit ... I practiced some anatomy and proportions.

Do i still make the same mistakes.

[guerrierhardcore]

Here is the last update.

I would really apperciate that I have no maistake left before I go on with color.

If the guy is one head more than the usual 8 is it dramatic?
Note : There are 2 images. One with a bigger head than the other.

Tell me any comement. I can take critique.

[guerrierhardcore]

I'm trying out some shading. After it's gona be color.

[dmitri]

I think they could both use some more... skull. Eyes are usually around the middle of the head. Especially the guy's head looks rather strange.

The girl's hands seem too small. Even chicks have rather large hands - about to the middle of one's forehead from the chin. Also her shoulder area seems very tense and unnatural in shape - a little more reference for that area might be good.

[sowens2008]

I agree with dmitri; you should definitely give them more skull.

I wouldn't make the head bigger like you did in the lower image in post #5. The top one looked fine.

[guerrierhardcore]

Okay.

- I have modified the heads a little. I made them
skuller (I think). Maybe it.s not enough.

- I struggled with the hands. Do they look better
positioned? And what about the size?

- Instead of changing the position of the
woman, I played with shadow. Is it better?

You will tell me.


Note: I could not wait to overview the effect of color
anyways, color is another layer.

[guerrierhardcore]

Hi
I'm adding some details to thier armor/suit what do you think?

Should it be less?

It's my first PS projetct that i did step by step with optimized layers structure so it's easy to change anything even color.