Character - monster near fire

[Robert Ashley]

This is one of my more recent things
http://www.robashley.com/bitch4.jpg

[Jason Manley]

the light is well done....if you want to push it a little further try using some small brushes to crackle in some details on that head...just part of it...i wouldnt over render as it seems you are shooting for mood...right now it seems over soft and a few hits of detail and shape with a small brush will bring it to the next level.

cool piece though...i dont know if yer wanting a crit or not...but its nice to see your work regardless.


j

[darkcult]

Freaky, scary and nightmarish – just the way I like it.

[michael see]

i dig the light and mood u did in this:)the fire is just awesome

[syntax]

Great piece! I love the contrast, great handle on lighting. Freaky content aswell, I like.

Cheers matey,
syn

[togusa]

is he unhappy because his crotch is on fire or is because of saggy manboobs? (ps. this a joke... not a salanderous attack on you as one malachi mahoney put it so nicely on artBQ). btw is this some sort of allusion to herpes? (btw this is another joke).

it isnt too bad, but you need to work on added a few more transitions in your values. things are somewhat harsh and transition too quickly... the halo around his form also is illconsived and the shape can be better designed.

[jayceel]

:D :D :D That is one funny picture. Well done.

JayCeeL

[Robert Ashley]

Jason thanks for the critique! I always look forward to comments on how to improve something I have worked on.

Togusa, thanks for the crit....although your jokes suck and I have no idea what malachi has to do with my post (p.s. this is a joke dont take it as a personal attack as you so nicely put it in my thread)

thanks for the comments to everyone else.

I think I will go back in an rework this a little more using the crits and helpful comments I have received.

[Minks]

Is this a self portrait?