My first post on the site

[airiq]

Hi,

it's my first illustration on this site.
I'm waiting your advice.

Eric
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[Janooh]

I like it. One question though.... why is there only a link to the drawing instead of the whole attachment??

[Wilhelm87]

It looks cool, but it also looks a little out of perspective, we see him directly from the front, but the horizon seems to be pretty far under him, almost like if he was leaning towards the viewer.

[Nyx702]

I really like the feel and texture of it but the outline I think really hurts the form. Also, is the wind blowing in two directions? The scarf and hair are moving in two directions. I think you have a style that you work well in but your composition needs more attention.

Congratulations for your first post!
Welcome to CA!

[airiq]

I don't understand why the image don't appear directly.
May be i made a mistake but i don't know where.

For the wrong perspective, i see what you said but i think it depends of the size of the character you imagine but may be it's not clear on the picture ( he's very tall ).

Sorry for bad writing, i'm not fluently english

Eric



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[airiq]

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[airiq]

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