2 guys, one color

[Yaseck]

These are my last comic-like pics.

SelfPortrait:
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~yaseck/yasecknew/rysunki/autoportret2.jpg

and prisoner:
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~yaseck/yasecknew/rysunki/wiszacy.jpg

Nothing really to say, but C&C as always welcome.

[Wight Zombie]

i think you got the overall shapes right and stuff, looks decent, and the movement and weight are pretty good. i think the 2nd pic, the guy need some depth to his chest aka from front to back, it almost lies flat. your art is very thin line, single line etc, which is kool, ive seen many do that, and it looks like the overall shapes and everything are in place, but its missing alot of personal detail. i think its looks a bit outlined, it needs a bit more detail. defined knuckles, fingernails, viens or creases in the arm, cracks in the stomach, muscle shapes etc. if you color real good you could proabably fill all the detail in with colors and just use the line art almost as a base guide. id say your definetly going somewhere, id take more time, maybe draw a bit bigger so you can have the space to fill in more details. id copy a bunch of anatomy shots from books or pics on line then id try remembering the detail when you create from your mind and really get those little things in your drawing to bring it out.