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Fireflights
November 28th, 2006, 11:07 PM
Two designs that are works-in-progress.

I was thinking of a rhino as I was drawing the 1st one, and of a deer while drawing the 2nd one.

The anatomy for the 2nd one isn't really final, as I need to find a reference first, and the bit I have now is just out of my head. :)

Any crits/comments welcome!

Serena-
November 28th, 2006, 11:31 PM
very cool so far. My only suggestion is more movement.

Fireflights
November 29th, 2006, 02:13 PM
thanks

tonyhough
November 29th, 2006, 06:26 PM
On the first critter, the nearest leg to us needs to go back a bit (about a half-width) to make it look properly balanced. Just a niggle...

Fireflights
November 29th, 2006, 07:12 PM
On the first critter, the nearest leg to us needs to go back a bit (about a half-width) to make it look properly balanced. Just a niggle...


ahh, good point! :D

softocean
December 3rd, 2006, 03:20 AM
beutiful detailing and light and shadow on the first piece. please finish detailing this one - it looks like it could become a portfolio piece. maybe pay attention to the placement of the far ear- it may be visible although the creature is being seen from its left side. The second creature doesn't look well grounded to me. Perhaps better placement of feet on a ground plane may help.

Vboyz
December 6th, 2006, 11:34 PM
1.nice detail..
2.good skin
3.so strong.
4.eye>?...not good enought:xbox: