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Grendel
June 20th, 2003, 12:38 AM
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http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/silence_THEN_boom.jpg
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http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/yeaper.jpg
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http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/breakonthrouhjtotheother.jpg
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http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/pge44.jpg
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http://igrendel.com/images/pencils/55.jpg
Cinsev
June 21st, 2003, 12:33 AM
your stuff is so stylish it makes me envious. its dark and really moody and just .... just.....plain good!
mushuhaha
June 22nd, 2003, 01:51 AM
This is just my honest opinion about your works shown here. I have seen a lot of your posts in the finished section, and all of them lack the work, quality, time and patience to be called finished. Instead of posting every single piece of scrap you drew and call it a finished piece, you should spend more time practice your most fundamental drawing skills, train your eyes to really look and appreciate your surroundings, and refine the ideas in your doodles.
custodian
June 23rd, 2003, 10:50 AM
Well, I dunno about this idea that it lacks finish - I disagree. If it's a submission idea for some project, cool. You could expect a piece of concept art to be finished when it conveys the idea/information that it's intended to convey without any confusion and with some emotiveness in there. It has a nice underpainting/storyboard basis to it, and the focal details give a fairly strong impression of the work's direction. Sometimes dark monochrome pictures look overly heavy and sketchy, but this imagery is effective / evocative / etc.
Behemoth
June 23rd, 2003, 10:54 AM
I think it lacks a little something in lighting and contrast, but it's very good.
And the title reminds me of the Queens of the Stone Age song of the same name, which is rattling round in my head now :D
Would be nice to see these coloured, although I appreciate the mood that monochrome lends to the atmosphere of the piece.
Grendel
June 23rd, 2003, 11:20 AM
these will be all painted over thanks for your comments and taking the time to look
cybermonkey
June 23rd, 2003, 03:04 PM
1. very dark and moody. i like it.
2. don't have them painted over :).
Grendel
June 25th, 2003, 06:43 PM
I think he is right in some respects I love creating imagdry but once its down on paper i find it difficult to keep pushing it to visual articulate perfection, because I guess my whole point was to present the idea visually not to make a pretty picture, but i am starting to learn you need to do one while doing the other...thanks guys.
and thse will be painted over by jeff(underbloom)
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