Sky High! just me fiddling around

[sjoerd]

I dont normally do this kinda shit but i thought hey what the heck my ft is up again so i can post again weeeee

http://www.webenga.com/blood/GFX/Skyhigh.jpg

so what do you think about it it doesnt look really crisp thats because I didnt feel like putting more effort innit

Sjoerd out

[sjoerd]

It would cheer me up if someone commented even when it's a bad crit :bash: :O!

goodnight!

[Crashman_120]

Put more detail into the plane....spend more time on it...

[sjoerd]

uh??? :confused:

like i said i dont feel like putting more into it...

[MolvaDo]

If you don't feel like putting more into it why should we even bother giving you a crit on this piece. If you ask for something don't be a smart ass when you don't get the response you want.

No Crit for you!
goodbye!

[sjoerd]

thats just plaine mean

I said i dindt feel like putting mor effort inti it, and when a guy says yuy should put more effort in it it sounds kinda dumb, work with me here.

crits and advice dont allways have to be "used" in the same piece..
maybe i was gonna make another one in this kinda style and THEN use the crits i had

but hey if you don't waht to crit why bother ey.

[Laconic]

It looks like a magazine or leaflet image that would ordinarily have some text around it. For what it is, i see nothing especially wrong with it. There is no light grey shadow for the top plane as far as i can tell, but the shadows are sylistic anyway so...

I think the lack of crits is because theres not a lot to critisise.

Laconic

[sjoerd]

thx

i Was trying to make some kind of sticker/leaflet out of it...

[Laconic]

Well you suceeded i would say.

Laconic.

[Cinsev]

my eyes get confused by the really strong black outline of the plane in the background......the whole area around the planes are just too busy because of it.......other than that nice comp.

like the way the planes (p-40?) are drawn.

C

[sjoerd]

Spitfire

close

or is p40 a spitfire bwah whatever :):beer:

[Cinsev]

nah a spitfire is a different plane. all good though

C

[keyth]

if this is something to have like....text around it or some other design-y elements, it would be easier to crit. i would like to see it as a layout or something. but for now, i don't really know what to say except there is a lot of space empty scream'n to be filled w/something.;)

[Erik]

I don;t think there should be more detail in there. Why is everybody always asking for more detail nowadays. Less detail is where the real challenge is.

The picture is very graphic, nice colors. Poster style, and might have text. If it's to be stand alone either blow it up or give it much more whitespace (more left and up than right and down). I'd lose the gradients though, make them also one shade of gray.

But like i said more a graphic (you could do them as a litho or 'zeefdruk' or something) than a painting.

E.

[dodowa]

waooo~cool!
your art remind Oriental painting..

specimen site
http://www.chihwaseon.com/