Help needed

[Halflife]

Heavily influenced by an image I saw, I drew this;

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o128/halflifedarkness/retro-future-small.jpg

Really having trouble getting it just right.. Help please (I know it's kinda boring...)?

[softocean]

be aware of the porportions distortions in the figure - the head seems rather large for the body. Also, placement of the eyes nose and mouth seem to be extreme as well. Eyes should be halway between top and bottom of the head.