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secundar
June 19th, 2003, 08:02 AM
Here's some first paintings for a short animation I'm producing. Looking for some crits from the exceptional craftsmen here. Thanks!

http://secundar.homedns.org:8080/~gary/wtlf/foreman01.jpg

http://secundar.homedns.org:8080/~gary/wtlf/factory01.jpg

This is Photoshop 7, Wacom 6x8. I want to improve some before i purchase Painter.

Forge
June 20th, 2003, 01:59 AM
looking not so bad so far you're factory has a great perspective maybe u should add more details... what is this purple light on it???
maybe your man seem a little flat add more shadows... work on the contrast... this flashy yellow background erase maybe your perso...
keep on workin';)