Kyoto Finished

[our]

This is my first post here at CA, ive been on deviant for a while though. Just thought id get some feedback on some work enjoy...

[oma]

wow, i really love this work!!

very nice!

[sourgasm]

really nice piece. love the colors and the sketchy quality to the linework.

only qualms:

the bridge reflection feels as solid as the bridge itself.

the left side feels a little dark. maybe intentional, in which case ignore me.

the sky in the bg feels a bit abrupt in areas of color change. the reflection in the water has a nice smooth gradient.


anyway. i really dig the piece. the format is really cool, too. i'd like to have it on my wall.

[JackJack]

Very moody piece!

the little girls legs look a bit crooked

and the neon sign in the foreground is distracting.

And like sourgasm said: the sky in the bg isn't the same color as the sky in the reflected water.

good work though!

keep postin!

[our]

Cheers for all the comments!

[meddling kid]

looks great man - really like it

watch the reflection of the neoon sign in the water though - it's backwards!

keep up the great work!

[Joey-b]

hmm i like it allot, the water could use some strong oranges from the lights

and i would loose the green highlights u got in the drawing