Clothed in the Sun (redux) (nudity)

[Jushra]

I'm redoing the image found in this thread (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=82470).

Below is the new pencil work. Draw over it and tell me what I need to do to correct her, and then I'll move onto the lights/darks.

Thanks.

[ivy'sgrandkid]

really cool concept, one things wrong in my eye though.. i think the left shoulder needs to be extended

[Serena-]

the jaw line is also not right.. right now it is making her face appear uneven. plus her torso size doesn't seem to match with her legs, her torso seems almost too big for her body... and considering the angle would actually put her waist the farthes back, and her torso and legs more forward they should be in decent proportion.

great idea, love the line work thus far either way - hope to see more work on it!

[Jushra]

i'm still experimenting with the pose, fixing proportions, etc etc. Let me know your thoughts.

[Joey-b]

her body is to short i think and the head is to big, compliments on the dynamic pose