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MUNIZ
November 19th, 2006, 11:02 PM
I'm looking for some critiques on this idea. Be honest I CAN TAKE IT! I was thinking of having a child in the foreground facing this Genie Concept.http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a148/lytewaave/Dude.gif
softocean
November 29th, 2006, 11:40 AM
perhaps a cloud of smoke as well as a lamp? nothing is reading genie about this image to me right now..
johanerik
November 29th, 2006, 01:42 PM
In a dark awsome alladin world I definitly see a genie... cool!
Serena-
November 29th, 2006, 11:22 PM
I see a genie in the d&d sense.. but adding some hints for people that don't exactly follow things of that nature like a lamp or smoke would help :D as was suggested.

the chest seems off, not sure why.. perhaps it needed to be more rounded - even if hidden by the arms cuz they're coming forward to wrap around him, and flex... first thing I noticed though was how stiff the band is holding his hair.. it's to straight up and stiff.. it seems flat and forced right now.

Other than that though, awesome work.. love the muscle structure, and the attitude - and the general concept. Great color scheme, and coloring thus far. :D
Serena-
November 29th, 2006, 11:22 PM
I see a genie in the d&d sense.. but adding some hints for people that don't exactly follow things of that nature like a lamp or smoke would help :D as was suggested.

the chest seems off, not sure why.. perhaps it needed to be more rounded - even if hidden by the arms cuz they're coming forward to wrap around him, and flex... first thing I noticed though was how stiff the band is holding his hair.. it's to straight up and stiff.. it seems flat and forced right now.

Other than that though, awesome work.. love the muscle structure, and the attitude - and the general concept. Great color scheme, and coloring thus far. :D
MUNIZ
December 3rd, 2006, 06:17 PM
MUNIZ
Thanks so much for the feedback guys! At least this way I have a check list to go by in order to improve the design.

A.lamp, smoke, (pontentially)
B.reconsider the anatomy

Does anyone know how to create a link to their sketchbook? I post so rarely and I'm just learning this stuff.

Serena, beautiful artwork by the way and great photos on your site!
SoftoceanGreat conceptual work on your site!

Thanks Again guys