vehicles

[jmascho]

Going to post my finished vehicle renderings in here. Crits appreciated. I apologize if the server stops sending the files...I have resorted to welfare hosting. *EDIT: Thanks to warpedminds for the new webspace*

http://jmascho.exo-style.com/sketch1.jpg

http://jmascho.exo-style.com/sketch2.jpg

http://jmascho.exo-style.com/sketch3.jpg

-jm

[AmadorL]

this are good prospectives and models man where did you pick it up?

[I.was.ink]

niiiiiiice. Looks a lot like you go to accd. do you?

[jmascho]

AmadorL: Thanks, still have alot of work to do.

I.was.ink: Thanks man. Nope, I'm not an Art Center kid ;p I start at Ringling next Fall. I'll take it as a compliment though.

[Yaseck]

Great vehicles. I like the cat-eye perspective in the first one piece.

[warpedminds]

nice work, do you have aim or msn? i could give you some hosting (i have lots) if you need it..

[Ron]

cool stuff. I like the first one best. they all look pretty solid perspective-wise too. good draftsmanship.

[JProvost]

Nothing like a good subframe to make a conceptual sketch pop. Nice drawings, designs and marker work.

My only crits:
-The first concept looks as if there's some perspective distortion happening at the front (it sort of looks like a wide-angle lens effect (or "cat's/fish-eye"). If it was intentional, you should push it a little farther to make it look more intentional.

-Work on your ellipses - errors really show in the second piece.

Keep them coming... Really nice work!

[Fisa]

very nice designs. you have mucho potnetial and i cannot wait to see where you will be once you have honed your technique. keep us updated.

the only crits i have are your ellipses (you need ellipse guides) and your stuff would jump out with more contrast. these are still nice though :)

[Wight Zombie]

i dig the 1st and third one, the 2nd one looks like a reverse star wars x wing with some tech stuff thrown in so its kinda funny to me. i keep picturing a xwing flying backward.

[jmascho]

Yaseck: Thanks, I'm hoping to use more interesting perspectives in my other stuff.

warpedminds: Thanks. I 'm grateful for the webspace.

Ron: Appreciate it. I checked out your site, some impressive stuff.

JProvost: Ellipses, on it :D Thanks man

Fisa: Appreciate your thoughts. Once I hone my technique, I'll be clinically insane ;p Yes...the ellipses heh

Wight Zombie: Thanks, yeah I can understand how you see an X-wing chassis in there. I was trying to mess around with a sort of space utility vehicle or something to that effect.

Appreciate the feedback. I'll post more soon.