new here: rain

[blackonyx2]

Hi I am new here and this is my first post. Here is a picture i've been working on today. The original sketch was in pencil/pen, then coloured in photoshop.
I'm not really sure how to attach a picture so this might not work but I will try...Any comments are welcome!

http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o115/blackonyx2/rain2.gif

[Serena-]

only crit is the back isn't shaped right... it needs to go in to a more V shape.. right now it seems blocky and square.

great first post.. good concept :) like to see it finished!

[v0rbiss]

The legs are too long.

[blackonyx2]

Hi thanks for your comments. About the legs: when I was drawing the figure on paper there wasn't enought space for the legs so I drew them separately and then pasted them on the figure in PS so maybe that's why it looks off... I have also noted the comment about the back. Thanks.