Chick with guns

[Rusty]

quickish marker/pen drawing of the top of my head,no references....just over an hour on this one

http://web.1asphost.com/rusty23/SBS-1/Step%203.jpg

A Step by Step process of this drawing can be seen here http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=7085&pagenumber=2

Not really happy with how this one turned out.
C & C wellcome

Rusty

[kenford]

it's a nice drawing, I like her expression, I think the problem with it is simply that her pose is very stiff, needs more attitude

[Guild Navigator]

Her head, face, arms and hips are beautyful. The main problem I see is the way her torso is drawn. Specificly on (her) left side. I'm not sure exactly what it is. It's either the fact ther boob doesn't overlap her arm like on her right or the line on (her) left doesn't go up behing her arm corectly or it's a little of both. Anyway something about it is seting off my spider sence.
Jeez, those guns are awesome.

[oxygen_77]

Overall, the image looks really nice, but I think for the amount her head appears to be turned downwards, the face doesn't properly reflect that downwards look. The mouth either seems too forward, or the eyes, nose and hat are too downwards angled. Maybe that's the problem people are having with it. I still think it's quite nice though!

[Gray]

First of all... I really like it.

But somehow I get the feeling she's falling over. As HER left shoulder AND hip are both lower then her right ones.

If you would "horizontal flip" the lower part (her hips) she might get a more balanced pose.

I'm not sure if it would make a great difference but i though to share it anyway.

Love all you other work too.

Cheers..