vampire for adults

[elstabo]

heres a vampy scenerio...
I will be coloring it soon,,but i wanted to here from the critiques out there..feel free..

[JFS]

My only crit is that there are some odd perspective conflicts here and there..

[MephistoLV]

I agree with JFS on the perspective thing.
Also, it seem a bit too bright and sunny in there for a vampire. If the room is lit by say, torches or candles as would be more in line with the typical legends, then the room would show much more shadowing with only a few brightly lit areas.

Cool piece though. I really like the half astonished, half curious look on the girl's face. Make some more stuff like this. The world needs more good gotherotica.

[Cookiedough]

I agree with previous crits. Also, watch the hands. They seem too sloppy and undefined compared to the rest.

The casket seems a bit too small for the vampire, though. If she'd stretch her legs, they'd fall out.

Lesbian vampires ftw.

[Kanchi]

The daylight makes sense actually since she is in her coffin, at least now we know what they do in there all day :) (not like they need the sleep)

[chaosrocks]

the antomy of the Vampire is very odd... real boobs dont stick up like that. and it l most looks like she is kissing herself. nice trick..don't think its possible
chaos

[Kantada]

the antomy of the Vampire is very odd... real boobs dont stick up like that. and it l most looks like she is kissing herself. nice trick..don't think its possible
chaos

Don't be so sceptical... She's a Vampire afterall. They do things. :^^;:

[Alday.J]

Elstabo, I love this shameless picture ! ;) I agree with comment made earlier, about some perspectives issues. About comments made on anatomy...
Don't be so sceptical...
I second that. :^^: For me it works like that. Ok, maybe something about the breast, but I will focus more on the perspective if I was you.
J.

[dreiden]

love the concept, but the perspective and the dimension son the coffin are really taking away from the rest of it.


keep it up.

[designboot]

hehe ... nice vamipire :)

[Rabid]

hehe ... nice vamipire :)
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Agreeing with previous crits, vampires might be sexy but I dont think they have the money or time for a plastic miracle....:$ :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

[Izi]

When you become a vampire, your boobs perk up and become size C. :D

I like this alot, it's sexy and interesting. The only problem is the wacky perspective, I think you could fix this easily in a remake or digital touchup. Also as said before, the coffin is too short and should extend outside the picture.

The lines on the stairs need to match the perspective on the pillar/coffin.

Pick a vanishing point and fix the lines, and you'll be good.

I can kiss my boobs so I know it's possible.

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