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Sakievich
June 16th, 2003, 01:16 PM
I had this in the WIP area, thought I would post it here as its finished, I am still open to critiques and suggestions on it.

Thanks to everyone for their suggestions and help!

http://petersakievich.com/for%20review/housesketch5.jpg

Muttonhead
June 16th, 2003, 01:31 PM
WOW! Great piece. Very very cool.

The round window on the front of the house seems a little bit off, but not too bad.

I would love to live in that house. If you can find an architect who will build that I will buy it.

-Sean

deschamps
June 16th, 2003, 01:33 PM
The light on the house is painted nicely. The cloud refelctions on the windows work really well also.

The rocks seem too soft to me. The rocks could be a little more angular and grooved together so it doesnt look like a pile of rocks but rather one big rock structure.

bfaubion
June 16th, 2003, 02:42 PM
i really like it all, i think the rock suggestion would help. maybe its just personal preference, but i think the clouds would look good with more definition, adding some more shadow and layers of clouds further in the background might help.

Thundaga
June 18th, 2003, 10:28 PM
Wow, nice! I think the roundness of the rocks give the house a right-at-home feel. But, how do you get up there?

Francis
June 19th, 2003, 01:20 AM
Very very nice, good feel.

Maybe you thought of it, but have you tried playing up warm and cool more? It seems very cool/bluesy to me, although could be my lcd....