Oriental warrior

[lamchop]

sorry for starting two threads in a row. this character goes with the earlier thred. i cant get that stupid right leg to look right. i havent drawn arms yet. anything else that appears wrong i am oblivious to, so please tell me :)
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e69/lamxchop/tiffany231.jpg

[JAG.]

her shoulders and top part of her chest seem way too small, almost sickly and decrepit. beef them up a bit to even out her weight distribution cuz she has rather large breasts and a small upper torso to carry the weight.

for the right leg, look up some refs of women in a similar pose, as it is now its too far away and not in the proper orientation. nice work though - JAG

[The Fritz]

Hi, nice concept. I'm thinking JAG is right about the shoulder. Concerning the right leg. Move it closer (looks like she left it behind) and twist it outward. Try to move in long steps and watch what your body is doing. The right foot twists on the frontpart (dont know the english word), so you can see the inner side of the foot. At the moment it does the opposite which makes it look weird. Just my two cent...