"The Waterfall Poetry", a Fantasy Oil Landscape

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Hello big world, here's my last painting "Waterfall Poetry", is oil/canvas, 90 x 65 cm...
really don't know if the Matrix writing on the left side was the best idea...

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here are some details:

http://www.evenimente.net/beautiful4est/waterfall/waterfall_beautiful4est_d1.jpg

http://www.evenimente.net/beautiful4est/waterfall/waterfall_beautiful4est_d2.jpg

http://www.evenimente.net/beautiful4est/waterfall/waterfall_beautiful4est_d3.jpg

http://www.evenimente.net/beautiful4est/waterfall/waterfall_beautiful4est_d4.jpg

http://www.evenimente.net/beautiful4est/waterfall/waterfall_beautiful4est_d5.jpg

[Art_Addict]

To me it's the kinda painting that could arise interest but doesn't.
There are several features that are painted well ( the waterfall for example )
but they don't connect with each other. None of them do.
Left side of the painting takes it out of balance, composition wise and
the matrix part would best be left out too I think.
But the main issue is the use of color to me. For the most part it looks like you
painted the blue and greens straight out of the tube. Subtle color and
value variations can make for interesting atmosphere and mood wich could
serve this painting, I think.
The best part is that you seem to have the patience and ability to paint in all
the things that could improve this and further paintings.

Good luck
Tom

[frixon]

art addict said pretty much everything i had to say.

interesting style thou, love the clouds on the left, but i wouldn't use the "flying" eyes... but that's just me.

[jfwalls]

The puzzle piece sky and clouds are the strongest part. A third of the painting on the left side could be removed and I wouldn't miss a thing. I would continue to unify that part with the rest of the painting and you'd have a great piece of art.