Yeah Beach Concepttttt

[Il Cielo]

Tada!

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/Il_Cielo/IMG_2339.jpg

And some burning apples for the fun of it
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/Il_Cielo/IMG_2148.jpg

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/Il_Cielo/IMG_1768.jpg

[mollyduker]

I feel like that could be artwork for a music album! Looking good. Though, the leaves are nice for texture and stuff, but I think they would be better if something interuppted the pattern. The apples are good photographically but I laughed when I saw them, burning apples seemed so random!

-Mollyduker

[Il Cielo]

Hey burning fruit is a well respected art form In...... Westchester

[klips]

Wicked! This is some awesome stuff mate!

In general: This is a great set. The colours are fantastic, in a subdued, undersaturated, almost phil holland-esque way. These are all good photos, the following crits are just what I would like to see in them if you shoot them again.

#1: Something about this doesn't work. I think it's the hair, just too everywhere for me. It looks like it was pretty windy though, hair streaming to the side would have been awesome :D

#2: Burning apples... o_0 different, but cool.

#3: This photo could do with a deeper dof, it's just a bit to abrupt in its out of focus-into focus-out of focus. Colours are spot on though.

#4 and 5: Just ... wow. Only thing to say is the 'KEEP OFF' in the background is a shame.

Do more!