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DormantWalker
October 30th, 2006, 10:49 PM
1
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-013.jpg

2
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-013.jpg

3
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-012.jpg

4
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-011.jpg

5
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-010.jpg

6
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-010.jpg

7
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-009-2.jpg

8
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-008.jpg

klips
October 31st, 2006, 12:51 AM
This is a cool set, here's some C&C for you.

1: It's nicely executed, but not very interesting for me. The dof is really nice and the subject is well defined. Maybe again with something else?

2:This is great, and it's a beautiful colour. Nicely composed, Is that the original colour? I'm just not used to green streetlights. Certainly my favourite from the set, more of this please!

3, 5 and 6: Spend a lot of time on buses? I know I do, so I have a connection to these, but not really much interest. Unsure about the subject in 3 and 5, 6 is good though. Is that blue shift due to underexposure or blue lights/windows?

4: It's a nice sunset and a good skyline, really not much else. I prefer the colour in sam's recent sunset pics, but that's a presonal thing.

7: It's a snapshot.

8: see 7, although I'm guessing it's a self portrait. If so, the other set where your tattoo is showing is a lot better.

Keep going with this, you're doing some really awesome stuff.

andres_pad
October 31st, 2006, 02:08 AM
i really like them man. the colours in all of them are so... modern? i dont know what the word is, but i like them. what kinda process (if any) do you use post-shooting?

claudeEGYPT
October 31st, 2006, 04:18 AM
Getting a lot better..

I think 1,2 and 7 are not a very good representative though. They look like you were trying to make something out of nothing.. too snap shotty-ish

In other words, i think these were not pre-composed. Always pre-compose before shooting, have the photo in your mind's eye.

But the others are good technically speaking.