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aseyca
October 29th, 2006, 11:38 AM
Hey there, this is my first post, i am here in hopes of getting some good criticism on my work.

Here are my most recent photos:

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/colorsoffall.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/deathvalley.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/ghostswing.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/lightingtheway.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/lookingout.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/power.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/seaofthedead.jpg

(no title 1)
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/unamed1.jpg

(no title 2)
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j237/aseycaf/unamed2.jpg

claudeEGYPT
October 29th, 2006, 01:50 PM
They are nice. Not wonderful.. Nice.
I think they are way too dreamy(on some photos this effect is effective and fitting, others, not too much)

Your tree shots are boring in my opinion.

The good points: Sea of the dead came out really nicely.
The Angel: Looks good, i would have cropped out the right, the trees are just no good to look at, somewhat distracting.
Looking Out On The Valley: I am not sure what i like about this.. Its not perfect.. but i sort of like it.

Otherwise, your framings are simple, nice.. not sure if i like the font you used(or its size).

Hope that was beneficial.

aseyca
October 30th, 2006, 04:20 PM
Thanks for the comments, anyone else?

Apfe
October 30th, 2006, 04:41 PM
I could give my opinion

I agree with Claude that your photos seem too dreamy for my taste. Sometimes it's an effective device, but definitely not always and not exaggerated. I like your composition in the very last photograph, it's making the picture stand out a little more which it probably others wouldn't have.
My favourite is by far "Sea of the dead" though - it's the simplest of your photos, and for that reason the best looking, in my opinion