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photeck121
October 19th, 2006, 10:53 AM
Unused production painting, should really go in unfinished i think :nohope:

Psionic
October 19th, 2006, 12:30 PM
Nice scene, could maybe use a few birds flitting about? Good stuff though and I like the foliage!

tgfx
October 19th, 2006, 12:34 PM
hey thats cool...Is it just me or does it feel HARD??? Too sharp...

photeck121
October 19th, 2006, 08:45 PM
Psionic- yeah birds might be good, cheers mate :)
tgfx- It probably feels that way because i used the sharpen filter a little ;)

Theo
October 20th, 2006, 04:30 AM
I like your style man. And the harsh hard lines rock. give me more! Also like the colors in this. Reminds a little bit of sparths "new style". and thats a cool thing!

The silhuetted characters need work though. Come to think of it, I need to practice the same thing:)

rock on

tharmine
October 20th, 2006, 04:37 AM
Fantastic. Bravo!

photeck121
October 20th, 2006, 06:20 AM
Cheers Theo, yeah the characters suck, think i just lost interest at this point cus the pic wasn't working at all.

michaelh
October 20th, 2006, 08:03 AM
Hey photeck121 -
I really like the quality of light you've got going and the general atmosphere is great. Your brushwork and palette look very stylish.
The only crit would be to perhaps work on the spatial construction of the painting. I have to really focus in to get the idea of what is supposed to be happening in the pictorial space. The scale, tone, contrast and definition of the foliage in various parts of the image make it a little difficult to seperate the different layers going back into the image.

photeck121
October 20th, 2006, 12:18 PM
Yeah there's no contrast between foreground and background. The tree doesn't work where it is, lol just looks slapped into the middle ;)

Thanks man :)