Dementist
June 11th, 2003, 08:48 PM
http://mbnet.fi/zenbie/uploaded/hangarhouse.jpg
http://mbnet.fi/zenbie/uploaded/hangarhouse.jpg
This one was rather quick, (2-3 hours) but its practically my first actual piece of concept art EVER, so I thought I'd ask for some crits on it.
It's suppsoed to be a small hut attached to an aircraft hangar. The little lump in the background is a city on a hill. The time of day is dusk, which I ATTEMPTED to convey. Above the door is a light, which I tried to make the light source for the front of the house. Done in regular ol' ballpoint pen.
Come on, Harsh Critique Time! I really want to improve!
http://mbnet.fi/zenbie/uploaded/hangarhouse.jpg
This one was rather quick, (2-3 hours) but its practically my first actual piece of concept art EVER, so I thought I'd ask for some crits on it.
It's suppsoed to be a small hut attached to an aircraft hangar. The little lump in the background is a city on a hill. The time of day is dusk, which I ATTEMPTED to convey. Above the door is a light, which I tried to make the light source for the front of the house. Done in regular ol' ballpoint pen.
Come on, Harsh Critique Time! I really want to improve!