Several "sketches-yet-not-so-rough" pieces.

[RyerOrdStar]

Please help me improve.
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/OC19.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/sky.gif
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/OC11.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/OC2.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/flar.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/drag.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/Ryer1234/flardrag.jpg

Thanks.

[Auralius]

Hey, these look pretty nice. Few things about the guy dancing - his head's probably a little too small, and I wish you'd do just a little more rendering on his boots - they look like you meant to have them in shadow, but that doesn't quite look right. His belt seems like it should have a little more of a profile, even if it's a thin one - the buckle looks smashed into his clothes/abdomen. Anyway, nice work.

[Psionic]

Really like the way you use the line weight to define areas/depth, one thing I see though on the dog with its head down and paw on its ear the back leg seems much harder then the front/head and it seems to pop forward,maybe harden up the outline around the head a little to bring it forward?? or soften that back a bit ;)

[Qitsune]

omg, the skyfirebolt character looks like Micheal Jackson with green hair.

There is nice stuff going on but be careful of gravity (it's not clear if the second to last dragon is flying or walking, but if it's on the ground, it will fall over soon)

[RyerOrdStar]

Thanks a lot ^^

Yah, sorry, the dragon is supposed to be contorted in midair looking behind him. But i get how it looks weird XP Should finish it up and make it look like he's in the air.

I never thought about the head thing, thanks. And yeah, i could do a bit more with the depth of some of the clothing.

And, yes, it does look like michael jackson XD