character design-humandog

[saxon]

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-6/201462/wildog.jpg

this is what i've made.. i've try my best to do this.. please give me some comments so that i can develope more.. and be better.. thanks~

[battlemonkey]

good start. the pose is too extreme! his veins look more like, tubes rather than his flesh. lose the shadow, or completely rework it. the shoulder anatomy feels off, check out some reference, or just check ur arm/shoulder in the mirror. i dont get the weapon either?
good start, keep at it, keep posting!
sorry so harsh, but thats the only way to learn.
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