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charliemoto
June 11th, 2003, 11:33 AM
http://www.marciosimas.com/freyes/images/portfolio/caveman72.jpg

Painted in PS 7
Crits and Comments welcomed.

Graykin
June 11th, 2003, 12:11 PM
Great Job!:D

SaltyDog
June 11th, 2003, 12:42 PM
I'm really digging this. You really managed to get a translucency to his skin, despite all the body hair!

Only a few crits. There seems to be a minor tangency where the heel of his right foot is meeting the left. And his left arm running alongside his body kind of makes for a weird read. Keep in mind the negative spaces of the drawing...How would it look silohuetted? And finally (and this is nitpicking on my part) I'd like to see some darker darks. The only real dark are his eyes which shouldn't necessarily be the darkest. Try increasing the contrast a bit more from the mid-range and add a darker background!! Like a cave or downtown Chicago (in case he's a timetraveling cro-magnon.)
:nana

darkcult
June 11th, 2003, 09:32 PM
Nice one!!!
I realy like it but somehow dislike the BG.

Post more!!!

:)