noobie.

[DormantWalker]

C&C plz. (though keep in mind I'm just starting out.)

1.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-003.jpg

2.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-002.jpg

3.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-001.jpg

4.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/self-004.jpg

5.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/self-002.jpg

6.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/self-001.jpg

7.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-002.jpg

8.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-001-2.jpg

[Mr. Mu]

Hi,

if you appreciate c&c from other noobs, too...;)


The first one has a great subject, maybe the point of view a bit lower to stretch the edges a bit more?

The second one has a great sharpness about the focal point. The fact that it is perfectly centered (also referred to as "dead center"), though, takes away any sense of motion. Don't know if that was on purpose, though...

The third one does not talk to me, I am afraid.

4-6 self portraits, I guess? I like the first and the third one, the third one being my favourite among the three. Nicely features your tattoo...

The macro shot of the eye is technically brilliant, imho. Pretty hard to get a depth of field working and making everything crisp and sharp when getting so close to the subject.

That's it from me - keep in my mind I'm a noob, so let's wait and see what others say, but if you are really just "starting out" then you're in for some fine shots, if I am not mistaken

[DormantWalker]

Aww thanks for the crits,

9.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-010.jpg

10.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-006.jpg

11.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/still-004.jpg

12.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-005.jpg

13.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/portrait-004.jpg

[DormantWalker]

14.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-003.jpg

15.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-004.jpg

16.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-005.jpg

17.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-006.jpg

18.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-007.jpg

19.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/scene-008.jpg

20.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/self-014.jpg

21.
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k258/DormantWalker/self-016.jpg