Chakata

[SeanE]

pencils and inks by Garrie Mukhawaram (thegerjoos on deviantart.com) and colour by ME!!. Tattoo design by 'teemunkle' also at deviantart. This is an unused cover for "The Kingdom Macabre" comic put out by John Schlim jr. at fablewoodstudios.com

cheers
Sean

[Fozzybar]

looks nice, but the textures don't follow the form, especially not on the armour of the guy on the right with the long tongue...

[Interceptor]

Nice! My only real beef is that the guy on the middle left does'nt even seem to realize thegirl is there. He looks liek he's giving the "wazzzuuuuup" to his pals.

Great pose on the girl :)

[SeanE]

ok... I've worked out how to use the attachment manager thingy-ma-jooga...

have done a few modifications while I was at it to the pic. Mostly constrasts and depth here and there, nothing major.

cheers
Sean

[Red Rabbit]

I don't think the small details are going to matter. I think the focus of 99% of guys will be on the lady with the skirt flying up and the chest pushed out....yeah, I wouldn't worry about it. :)

[Johnnyhorse]

Hah, well said Red Rabbit.
There is one thing that is troublesome however, which I wouldn't call a small detail. It's the armpit of the girl... it looks more like a cylinder attached to a torso, rather than several muscles stretching and overlapping, leaving a gap. Check out some references to see how the underside/armpit would look in a flexed, arm raised pose.
Also, you should give her stomach a little more detail/definition

[Slash]

I think the tattoos look way too sketchy. At first i thought it was bloodsplatter. It should also follow the form a little more.

I also dont care much for the asymmetry in her outfit, the straps that goes into her crotch arent the same lenght, i've done that same mistake before. The clothes needs to follow the pose realistically, otherwise it will look like the clothes are made for that pose in particular.

[Psionic]

Really nice work but it would be great to see some scratches/edges/shines on that metal here and there, anyway its still a great pic!!

[theblackhand]

The only thing that bothers me is the discrepancy between the sizes of her thighs. The left thigh looks larger than her torso.

[SeanE]

all the pencil crits are duely considered and I agree with you on the overly large left leg and assymetrical bits - but I only coloured it

I did have more stommach definition - but I was asked to tone that down... go figure.

yep - could have done the underarm better...

nope - I think the tattoo stuff looks just fine...