image dump (need feedback)

[metalwinds]

need lots of comments on these. ive been experimenting a lot the past few days, so i want to know what you guys think about the various attempts.
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/pensh.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/councwh.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/concpen.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/machgun.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/markerwom.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/charcwom.jpg
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/jedichar.jpg

[gasmask]

those are pretty nice, only thing i would say is all ur faces look alike so u might wanna do some eye studies cause i think thats what it is, i like ur guys with gasmasks concepts, good stuff, once i get a web host i will be able to post. I like gasmasks, hehe. nice style, keep practicen, ur on the right track it seems.

[jarvis2824]

I agree with gas boy there on the eyes thing. Have no idea to help you one that unfortunately. As for the style, I really like how you blend cloth and armor into these beautiful costumes. Keep it up.

Chris

[Erik]

I like your line work and the shading you did. Very simplistic yet expressive. Is that ballpoint?

I also like your marker page in the shading and style. However the sitting girl's anatomy is a little weird. May be the clothing on the shoulders or trouble with the foreshortening but it feels weird.

Try out heads from all different angles. I'm doiing that now and it's a lot of fun! There's good study material on fineart.sk for that, the Loomis books section :

http://www.gameartworks.com/LoomisBooks/heads/page_01.htm

is great imo.

E.

[metalwinds]

thanks for the comments guys. i need to work on making the faces different, so i ll look into the eyes thing.

erik - yeah, i knew the girls anatomy was a little off when i posted it.. .her head and legs are off. i ll look at the head thing and do some studies or pieces with them. i dont use a ballpoint pen.. its a sakura micron pen (02).

[endregan]

wow really cool. I need more prac with life drawing and stuff :D

[Aikisean]

Nice shading, nice line work... Now, start working those camera angles. Go crazy with that. Exercise your foreshortening skills. Tell one of the pretty young ladies you got there to turn their back to you and draw that. Use more then one model in a composition. Now that should test you.

[metalwinds]

i ll get working on those suggestions aikisean. thanks for the response guys

[R_M]

Hi Metalwinds,
expereimenting has brough good things to your sketches :D

I especially like the ones with the girls shaded with the markers.

you should try some bg to complememt your characters.

[oxygen_77]

I think you draw the mouth very well! you should maybe work a little more though on your shading with the markers... Keep up the good work!

[metalwinds]

R_M - yeah, backrounds are something that i wanna get into, but i havent been working on any because ive been really unsatisfied with the people i have been producing lately. i ll get started on some soon

oxygen - yeah, ive only used the markers a few times, so theres a lot i need to learn about them

thanks for the comments guys

[damnskippy]

I love your work, MW... I especially like the middle piece, with the evil looking woman, and girl in a headress... the markers give it some nice depth, and the headress is lovely. I'd like to see that character expanded on a bit. I also like the second-last image (girl in funky skirt), although the strangeness of her hand hurts the image a bit.

Your style is very pleasant. Pretty*!

*It's a compliment. :)

[behemot5]

i like your works like a lot of personn here... (perhaps one or two little mistakes of anatomy)...you have a unique style and i like the way you experiments....your sketches are quite strong and you have good ideas .
continu to experiment...