Medievel Human design

[Dr.Bigdick]

Hi, this is for a Fantasy-Roleplaying-Game called
"Amar o Sigon" (if you want more informations click here: http://abw.sourceforge.net/ )

He is one of 4 possible classes you can choose. (the others are sectret in the moment)


http://abw.sourceforge.net/pictures/Konzept/13.jpg

feel free to call me a motherfucking Noob

[Halis_Aetrous]

I'll give you the positives and negatives...

Positives: The arms and hands are well done. Also, the coloring and shading are pretty impressive (better than anything I could do). You can really work well with the earth tones. The feet are well done, and you are good with cloth.

Negatives: Some more work could be done on the face. It looks like the ear / jaw bone run a bit too far back. And his right shoulder looks to be longer than his left. That might be attributed to just a proportional error, or the angle at which he is standing isnt comming across.

These are just my opinions. Take them or leave them. =)

Overall, a nice drawing. Keep up the good work.

[Dr.Bigdick]

thanks for the crits.... you are right with the face.
hope there will come some replies more

[Grooveholmes]

Something else that could use some attention, the proportions on the legs needs to be flipped (upper-leg/lower-leg) Remember that the Femur aka thigh-bone is the longest bone on the body.

J