The Assembly Line

[talos72]

Painter 8 and Photoshop 7

http://users.adelphia.net/~atirgari/assemblyline.jpg

[foster]

i like this! if you put a figure halfway appearing and halfway off of the page it would have more of an assembly line look.

great color, lots of fun, the back ground defeats it to a degree. perhaps the green is too intense and there is too much detail in the machinery. i would rather see you paint some machinery, then i think this painting would be complete.

jon

[talos72]

Jon, thanks for the tips. I did fix the composition, and knocked back the background. By the way, just got your book in mail from Amazon few days back. Great stuff! ;)

[R_M]

Hi talos,
nice concept, but I have a minor composition suggestion.
Right now the assembly line isn't moving because the main focus on the picture is in the middle.
try to move the main character to the right a bit, and see what happens with the dinamism of the pic.