Elf Sci Fantasy

[Gisaiagami]

Hi :yayca:
my new digital painting attempt
It wanted to know what they find

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/4234/001nj0.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=001nj0.jpg)
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6288/elfa2eg9.th.jpg (http://img215.imageshack.us/my.php?image=elfa2eg9.jpg)
The ultimate wip
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/elfa-2.jpg

[Serena-]

it's hard to critique at this point since you aren't really any where near finished with it.. but I can point out that the hair line seems a little flatter in the painting then it was in the sketch.

I really like the lips and the grass thus far, they came out very nicely. :)

[Gisaiagami]

hi serena
the hair is very problem
My ultimate wip
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/elfa-3.jpg

C&C very welcome please

[Gisaiagami]

After long time
This is my attempt to leave the eye more “3d”
It is not really as I want, I am feeling great difficulty in this and leaving the forms “3d”, beyond refining. But I used to advantage pra to change the sky and to mount new concept for my illustration. It wanted opinions and help

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/elfa-5.jpg

I wanted to try to learn to paint well. Day 8 is my anniversary and wanted the the least to be with this done face.
Some say that mine problem made painting is in my drawing, also wanted to know the your opinion, if this really has to see. I believe that not.

Thank you for all C&C

[SigiLee]

Quick crit. I think you took the 3d out of her face in that latest update, looks kind of flat now. The hair looks less alive also.
Her left eye seems to be in a somewhat awkward position, maybe point it more to the middle?

You also dulled out the colours in general in the update I think. I liked the richness of the colours in the previous update (the yellow background helped with that too).

The grass and the lips were the first things that got my attention as well, just like Serena.

[Gisaiagami]

The fact of the color change has to see with the technology concept. Some of the ideias are to contruir great building. The eyes I am having problems to paint it