Wasp Woman

[Epoxy5]

An image I have made over the last couple of days.. Some lines still need a little refinement, but I doubt it will be done soon, so I call it done.
Comments are appriciated.

http://www.epoxy5.com/forum/wasp.jpg

[Epoxy5]

Almost 100 views and no replies - that bad :confused:

[Tomasis]

yes that is bad :(

[DustinTrimble]

I think that large woman have the same bones as normal people, thus in this painting the masive pevlis looks wrong, maybe get some reference and see what large woman really are like. Also the folds on the side under the arm are soft, while the rest of the shirt looks smooth and tight, thus it looks wrong. Lastly the nose looks cartoony to me, and doesn't seem to fit with the level of detail in the eyes. Also the design isn't really pushing any boundaries, and is kinda looking tongue in cheekish in that oh "look it's a large woman" where if it was a hero she would be in a more heroic pose, and with a better(though still large) overal shape.
What I do like is the little wasps and the painting quality in general. It's nice work, but could have been developed a little more.

[Elwell]

I like it. It's got a little bit of a Mark Ryden vibe going on.

The anatomy of the breasts needs work. Right now it looks like she's wearing a breast-shaped bib. The under curve of th breasts should extend into the armpits, not up to her shoulders.

Also, that hint of purple under her left eye is out of place with the rest of the palette.

The little wasps on the garters are a great touch.

[darkcult]

Now this is what I call a good illustration!!!
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