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wolf99
June 7th, 2003, 07:44 PM
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/gunman_3.jpg



I felt for submitting something :)
This is an old pic with lots of misstakes,but Im not chasing after reality...not in this case anyway!

Please leave comments and critics if you wish :)

krayz
June 9th, 2003, 03:56 AM
You could be on to a nice style here. It looks nice but so much is missing... some parts could do with some detail and the underlying anatomy doesn't really convince me.

Tighten it up... could be great.

stutte
June 9th, 2003, 04:00 AM
its OK, but lay off the watercolor filter.

Irate Customer
June 9th, 2003, 07:38 AM
I think the watercolor looks great. Not many people are going with a such a blantant watercolor feel to it, and the semi-abstractness is very cool. I do agree some things should be fleshed in. You mentioned it had lots of mistakes, but I don't see it that way. It just needs some enhancements, which are a lot easier to implement than fixing mistakes. Very nice work.

Irate

stutte
June 10th, 2003, 03:24 AM
I dont mind a watercolor feel, but PAINT IT YOURSELF!! instead of clicking a filter button....my dog can click a filter button.

R_M
June 10th, 2003, 05:25 AM
Hey Wolf99 I like the hand holding the gun.

Oh, on wolfs behalf I think he is using wet edges setting on his brushes and not a filter. Being rude and shouting in caps isn't really constructive criticism now, is it?