bulletproof?

[behemot5]

i did this for the moment (mouse and photoshop ) and i don't know what is wrong on....comments and ideas are welcome. Does it suck???http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/no_more_pain.jpg

[behemot5]

or this onehttp://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/dark/no_more_pain_blue_version.jpg

[R_M]

Nice facial expression.
the second one is better. blue is a sad colour, and a depressing one so it would fit better with the theme you have chosen.
overll the image is a bit confused though. he is a vampire, right? well if he is, you have allredy a strong theme to the pic, an imortale evil being tring to kill it self.
that is enough.
by adding the bed and all that other story with the murders, you take focus way from the main theme.
Anyway it is amazing it is a mouse job. you should seriously consider getting a wacom.

[behemot5]

i tried to show how the bestiality of a vampire not allowed him to fall in love ...he's starving of blood and kills the one he loves, then he hates himself and try to kill himself.....
R_M : thanks a lot for your comment....( i asked myself if i drawn a shit one more time 'cause i have no comments on my pics :-p )