A nude Invisible Woman

[Scorned1]

Worked from a live model to get the pose. She kinda had that Sue Storm from the Fantastic Four going with the hair cut. Did it in less than a 24 hours period. Aside from the lack there of a background, I think it is finished. What do ya’all thinks?

http://home.comcast.net/~tbui2020/Invicible_Woman-final.jpg

[Hendric VII]

The sheet looks too hairy or textured next to the great job you did on her skin. Other than that great stuff!

[le capitan]

aside from the aforementioned, the tattoo has no rendering around the armit looks simply dropped on. It needs to be shaded with the arm, you did it somewhat but still the darker side should blend in more with the shadows of her arm. hopefully that makes sense.

the face is VERY well done. Her hair is kinda iffy, It looks nice but i think you used too many brush strokes. Remember to work from big to detail.
peace,

[Chr]

the cloth/fabric/drapery/clothes looks a bit flat. it has only small forms. no big ones.

you have more patience than me. the face looks very good.

[Scorned1]

aside from the aforementioned, the tattoo has no rendering around the armit looks simply dropped on. It needs to be shaded with the arm, you did it somewhat but still the darker side should blend in more with the shadows of her arm. hopefully that makes sense.


I thought I already did that. But hmmmm.......:er:

[Cookiedough]

- Not enough. You chose a font with many curves. But the letters don't curve around her arm enough. The solid black stands out too much. Blend it a bit more, make it a rather greyish black. Else it looks like a fake tattoo.
- The ear might be a li'l too close to her face.
- I have to agree with the previous posters on the cloth and hair. Kinda seems like you went to details a bit too early. Might wanna blur some of the loose hairs or at least the tips of those.
- It took me a while to understand the white haze. Then i realized those are her legs... I dunno, i guess it would help if you'd show the transition from transparent to solid there a bit more.
- Personally, i don't like her orange lipstick/nailpolish. Magazines tend to tell us to avoid that color, cos it makes the teeth look more yellow then they actually are. Sue seems like a healthy girl who likes the sun, orange is not her color. So i guess i'd like a bit more pinkish or reddish colors in there.
- Her farther eye could use some more attention. It's rather flat compared to the other one.
- Her closest collarbone makes me wonder, it looks a bit off, the way it connects to the other one. If the neck and bone near the arm is so apparent, then there should be a li'l more bulges and humps from the collarbones visible. That area seem a li'l too 'solid' atm. Maybe a li'l more detail.

She has a bit of a young Olivia Newton John thing going with her face. Really welldone and that hand is beautiful. I've been nitpicking, but patting your ass alone isn't gonna help you get better. You can push this a bit more, cos it's really good. Just needs a li'l more attention to some details.

[ramonsk8]

I can still see her, so she's not invisible, haha... it;s real easy to create a invisible character: just draw nothing, haha just kidding, great job, fantastic 4 rocks!

[Marty666]

Very nice work! Also good crits. Only thing I can add to the above is that you can soften the hair a bit. Especially at the silhouette and places/surfaces that are not perpendicular to the viewing directon (hope this is understandable). I also have trouble reading the white haze. If you gave it a transition or sharper silhouette it would read better.

[Scorned1]

- I've been nitpicking, but patting your ass alone isn't gonna help you get better. You can push this a bit more, cos it's really good. Just needs a li'l more attention to some details.

Hey man, I'm very glad for the critiques because it showed that you cared enough to stopped for a moment and wrote something constructive. Rocked on !

[CCorsair]

Ok well here what Isee and I hold you take this right.
Fist I see something just not right in the face it has good structure but if has an off set look too flat but I can see the right side (her left) eye is set some what off the center is just off.
the second is the ears is a bit low from eye set as well as the the cheek closes to us. it seem bigger.
the neck is big too the "v" of the neck from the chin is off..too long and it is off from the center of the collarbones.
the sholder where tat is is bigger looing that the other. it it was bent more and showing more back may be but it seem big..
her thumb on her hand looks too long as well but the hand looks good.

On the sheet take a real sheet and drap it.. I think there is too many folds in it and it looks off as well too

I would see if you could fix the face on her left side(right side of the drawing) and work on the other items other have said as well.

you doing good work here just need some refinement.


I like the hear and skin textuers. color is good .

Ok well that what can see for now..

ok back to brail book of the month.

CC

[le capitan]

i must be an asshole, thanks for backing my ass up cookiedough, lol.
scorned: i did notice you did mess with it somewhat but its still not enough, basically what cookiedough said....
cheers,